Balibo
August 3, 2010
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IMDB rating: 7.10 Plot: As Indonesia prepares to invade the tiny nation of East Timor, five Australian based journalists go missing. Four weeks later, veteran foreign correspondent Roger East is lured to East Timor by the young and charismatic Jose Ramos-Horta to tell the story of his country and investigate the fate of the missing men. As East’s determination to uncover the truth grows, the threat of invasion intensifies and an unlikely friendship develops between the last foreign correspondent in East Timor and the man who will become President. BALIBO is a political thriller that tells the true story of crimes that have been covered up for over thirty years. |
Actors: Phillips Nathan,Winter Mark Leonard,Gameau Damon,Grantley Gyton,Isaac Oscar,LaPaglia Anthony,Sonkkila Paul,Winter Mark,Wright Tom,Thriller,
Need Movie Help!!!!!!!!!!! (guys only) !!!!!!?
Hi guys!
I’m going to the movies with my boyfriend and I don’t know which movie to see.
These are my options.
My Sister’s Keeper
Push
Balibo
500 Days of Summer
Please let me know!
Everybody is different. Perhaps you should ask him? As a guy, the thing that makes me the happiest is seeing something that my girlfriend wants to see, and on top of that, being with her.
| Sep 08, 2009
500 Day of Summer
Kyle | Sep 08, 2009
500 days of summer!!!! that movie is just fcking awesome. its not a chick flick. just watch it, you wont be disappointed. A+
Gabriel | Sep 08, 2009
i mean i dont know the guy, but to most guys Push looks the most appealing, if the push you listed is that action movie that came out a few months ago about the people with super powers.
bassman | Sep 08, 2009
500 days of summer cuz its about a love story but they break up so idk push was ok but kinda stupid too, i liked 500 days i saw it with my girl and we ended up sayin we’ll never be like that and we hooked up for wat seemed like days … have fun and enjoy … keep me updated
Jake | Sep 08, 2009
Push was OK. 500 Days of Summer looks really good and artsy. Never heard of Balibo… My Sister’s Keeper sounds like a tear-jerker.
Forest G | Sep 08, 2009
500 days of summer, i like the movie trailer
Wajid | Sep 08, 2009
Out of those I guess I would have to pick 500 Days of Summer
Embryoyo | Sep 08, 2009
me and my girl go for any movie but we kiss and make out.
leo wit my gameface ! | Sep 08, 2009
doesnt really matter ur just going to end up makin out but if u had to decide then i would go with ,…..
push i like it
P.U.M.A | Sep 08, 2009
Balibo
August 2, 2010
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IMDB rating: 7.10 Plot: As Indonesia prepares to invade the tiny nation of East Timor, five Australian based journalists go missing. Four weeks later, veteran foreign correspondent Roger East is lured to East Timor by the young and charismatic Jose Ramos-Horta to tell the story of his country and investigate the fate of the missing men. As East’s determination to uncover the truth grows, the threat of invasion intensifies and an unlikely friendship develops between the last foreign correspondent in East Timor and the man who will become President. BALIBO is a political thriller that tells the true story of crimes that have been covered up for over thirty years. |
Actors: Phillips Nathan,Winter Mark Leonard,Gameau Damon,Grantley Gyton,Isaac Oscar,LaPaglia Anthony,Sonkkila Paul,Winter Mark,Wright Tom,Thriller,
What is meant by "came with a lot of baggage"?
The full sentence is:
I was only 14 when my brother Tony was killed. After that people would say
The Yes Men Fix the World
July 30, 2010
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IMDB rating: 7.60 Plot: Troublemaking duo Andy Bichlbaum and Mike Bonanno, posing as their industrious alter-egos, expose the people profiting from Hurricane Katrina, the faces behind the environmental disaster in Bhopal, and other shocking events. |
Actors: Watts Reggie,Bonanno Mike,Documentary,
Would you like to save the planet for new years?
The true culprit in Global Climate Change is the SUN! BUT, whether you believe it is caused by mans green house gas emissions OR through natural cycles, one FACT is clear: In 5 billion years, the SUN will destroy all life on Earth. Once the Sun exhausts its hydrogen fuel, it will bloat into a red giant. Its surface will engulf Venus and may extend to our orbit.
Science backs this fact. Nuclear energy my friends is going to kill every polar bear, furry little seal and talking cartoon rabbit and dear on this planet! Yes, the same type of energy developed by the USA with the sole intent to murder peace loving Asians on the brink of surrender will destroy Mother Earth in the future.
The only course of action we as humans with a social conscience can take is to destroy the Sun, and do it before it gets a chance to destroy our precious planet. Right now, the Sun is sending harmful UV light which is fueling the green house effect, it is also a key component to the climate of the Earth…IT must be stopped if we are to truly survive. We can sit here and point fingers or we can attack the source of the problem head on.
Will you join us in our struggle for survival by writing your representatives and demand that they encourage global cooperation in this Earth saving task? If you wait another 5 billion years, it will be too late!
In order to buy time, we must reclaim as much hydrogen here on earth and send it to the Sun in order to post-pone the inevitable until technology is developed that will destroy it.
The UN needs to establish a Global Hydrogen Reclamation Committee, staffed by the best and brightest sociologist. This committee will be responsible for deciding on which nations have surplus hydrogen based on potable water supplies and indoor plumbing. These nations will contribute those surpluses of hydrogen to be collected on behalf of the world, to be sent directly to the Sun in order to stave off disaster just one more day.
It may sound impossible, but it is better than doing nothing until a suitable solution to destroy the Sun can be found.
We must work to get China and India on board. Also consider the benefits gained from "Yellow" technologies! Jobs will be created in the Global Hydrogen Reclamation Division and there will be many more jobs directed toward creating a device or method to destroy the Sun.
While the "Green" movement seeks to profit from a temporary "fix", the "Yellow" movement actually seeks to stop the problem at its source! By destroying it once and for all. Only then will this life giving planet be habitable for cola drinking polar bears, sad eyed baby seals, hyper-intelligent dolphins and talking cartoon animals. Unless of course you deny the science which backs the fact that the Sun will exhaust its fuel source and become a red giant…thus destroying all those lovable creatures previously mentioned. Or are you in the pocket of "Big Green"? Bent on raking in profits from temporary and futile fixes with out a care about what will come in the long run…?
Something must be done now to ensure the survival of our life giving planet for eternity! Governmental action must be called upon in order to save Mother Earth from eminent destruction. We here at M.A.N./F.I.R.S.T. (Mankind Against Nuclear Fusion Intent on Reversing Solar Tyranny) believe the science is settled on this issue. Big Green would rather profit in the short run with curly light bulbs and electric cars, but WE offer a solution to a very real problem!
http://www.facebook.com//profile.php?v=f eed&story_fbid=232013857696&id=1 365020988#/pages/MANFIRST/231095016081
Icarus: So you base your thought on what you did not read? The science is settled. The Sun WILL indeed destroy this life giving planet as long as we do nothing. Open your mind and stop being a denier.
would i like to save the planet for new years? NO WAY! i want to get all i can out of the planet while i am alive. i want to squeeze the planet like a wet sponge, then run it through a ringer and get every fricking drop of potential out this planet just for me. when i am dead i won’t care a whit about the planet, let the future generations find another planet to use, as for me… i want it all and i want it now!
| Jan 01, 2010
There’s no way I’m reading all of that. But you’re against nuclear. So we get rid of it. What do we fill the void with? Coal? Oil?
Anything else is either ineffective or untested.
Wait, "The only course of action we as humans with a social conscience can take is to destroy the Sun"
Around here I decided you aren’t serious.
Dass | Jan 01, 2010
"The true culprit in Global Climate Change is the SUN!"
Long disproven, sorry. The true culprit is human activity - principally the burning of fossil fuels.
icarus62 | Jan 01, 2010
Yeah, what you said.
Amazing how the political man thinks he can save the world.
The world has been reparing and replenishing itself all by it’s self without "his"help.
I agree "the political man" wants my last dollar and he will think up anything to get it.
mishpocha | Jan 01, 2010
The Yes Men Fix the World
July 17, 2010
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IMDB rating: 7.60 Plot: Troublemaking duo Andy Bichlbaum and Mike Bonanno, posing as their industrious alter-egos, expose the people profiting from Hurricane Katrina, the faces behind the environmental disaster in Bhopal, and other shocking events. |
Actors: Watts Reggie,Bonanno Mike,Documentary,
How many times you remembered me, oh ! Narada? what we learn from this story?
we go to heaven now…and then come to earth. (EPISODE 3 will come soon, since the Animals in forest postponed its trip to Africa due to heavy rain and strom there at Africa)
HEAVEN
Narada: narayana..narayana..
Sri Vishnu: Narada, welcome. what brings you here, narada ?
Narada: I have come here to ask you a question, oh ! narayana.
Sri vishnu: oh ! Let me hear it from you, Deva rishi.
Narada: Oh ! Thanks for hearing me, oh ! mahavishnu, i am singing your name every second
all the day, singing your glory all my life every minute of it, oh ! God, can any one there
more devoted to you than me ?
Mahavishnu: is that your question ? oh ! Devarishi, a farmer living in the earth is the great devotee,
why, he is the greatest devotee than you, narada. you go there and see him.
Earth
narada: yes, there the farmer..does he think of narayana, let me watch..
Farmer: while tieing a cow..om hari..hari..govinda.
while sitting to take food: om hari hari narayana..i am taking this food because of you oh ! namo
narayan..narayana..
morning: Govinda, hari..hari..oh ! God narayana, may i always have faith in you, i seek nothing else
while feeding the ox: praise be to Hari, who sustains the world..om namo narayana..hari..hari..
Narada : oh ! my dear farmer, what a pious man you are !! A great devotee of God Mahavishnu..
you keep repeating the name of narayana.. how many times or how often would that be?
Farmer: well, i think of Hari as i get up, before i go to bed, while taking food, as many times in
between as my work permits..
NOW AGAIN TO HEAVEN
Narada: Om namo narayana..narayana..narayana..i saw the farmer..Narayana, Madhava, Kesava,
Thiruvikrama, vamana, sridhara, rishikesa, padmanabha, damodara..nandha nandhana..
Mahavishnu: what narada ? what do you say ?
Narada: Narayana..what i have to tell ? is he a great devotee than me ? He is thinking of you
at night, in the morning, and a very few times only in between, while i think of you all
the time, even though ..and yet you call him one of your greatest devotees..wonderful..
Mahavishnu: (YOU WILL SOON SEE WHY?) Narada i give you a vessel filled to the brim with oil
balance this vessel on your head, walk around and come back here without spilling
a drop of the oil…..
Narada now with vessel on his head.. He speaks himself..” i must be causious lest the oil should spill..Ah ! Ah ! that was a close call, had i slipped, the oil would have split. i must be more careful..Aha..finally i completed successfully..om namo narayana..i did it successfully, narayana..
Mahavishnu: Good, you are back..nice. narada, tell me now how many times did you remember
me during your walk ?
Narada: not once prabho..i am afraid. how could i ? All my attention was fixed on the oil & vessel
Mahavishnu: HA..Ha..narada..that former has hard work to do, yet he remembered me at least
as you said a very few times, while you could not remember me even once..
Narada: narayana..narayana..i accept, those who remember you amidst hard works without doubt
even if they say a few times a day are really a greatest devotees…
PLEASE
SEE
THIS QUESTION
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index; _ylt=AhYHZjWtM6KFRq67m7fVN7nsy6IX;_ylv=3 ?qid=20091202072156AAwc40e
Dear Mathangi Rani
Yet another great moral story from you.
Excellent way of telling whom God loves more and Who is God’s real devotee.
I do recite Adityahiruthayam ( in my mind ) while doing work ) and other astothrams like Vishnusaharanamam. it gives me lot of mental peace and keeps my mind occupied also.
ofcourse i do my job also lol
This story is based on a poem by Nirala.
This short story was written by Sujata.C
The moral of the story is
The Yes Men Fix the World
July 2, 2010
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IMDB rating: 7.60 Plot: Troublemaking duo Andy Bichlbaum and Mike Bonanno, posing as their industrious alter-egos, expose the people profiting from Hurricane Katrina, the faces behind the environmental disaster in Bhopal, and other shocking events. |
here find and download movie The Yes Men Fix the World in DivX quaity
Actors: Watts Reggie,Bonanno Mike,Documentary,
if President Obama ran for president again would you vote for him?
in my opinion , everyone expects WAY to much from him already .. our last president was an ass , and we elected him TWICE ! obama is 1 million times better then bush ever was . idk why people expect him to be like super man and fix the world .
he’s TRYING to get us out of the economic crisis . he’s not GOD he cant work miracles .
i just feel like people are nagging him left and right , and when they dont get what they want they claim he’s the worst president in history .
yes he made a few mistakes . but its much better then what bush has ever done for us , but No , there wasn’t a big fuss on the news about how bush flipped off america . but there WAS a big thing on how obama " killed a damn fly " oh my gosh that’s like a million times worse then flipping off america =[ oo ho ho im going to cry ! please … people need to get their heads out their asses and look at reality . no ones perfect . bush was far from it , and obama is way ahead of bush .
so if obama ever ran for presidency again i would most DEFINITELY vote for him !
it feels like a big stabb in the back .. people were all gun ho and celebrating when he won . nd now they hate him …
i love this answer .. although i think people didnt JUST vote for him because he was black . it was partly that and because he was a good candidate . if he was white , people probably wouldnt have made such a big deal about this and he would have still won. but heres the answer that also makes sense by the person with the cat icon :
We had no choice. He was the only option.
To have Palin a heartbeat away from attaining the Presidency would have been a disaster beyond comprehension.
I’m still convinced that the election was given to Obama when Palin was chosen for McCain.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ntEE9Zy-q
The Yes Men Fix the World
June 20, 2010
|
IMDB rating: 7.60 Plot: Troublemaking duo Andy Bichlbaum and Mike Bonanno, posing as their industrious alter-egos, expose the people profiting from Hurricane Katrina, the faces behind the environmental disaster in Bhopal, and other shocking events. |
Actors: Watts Reggie,Bonanno Mike,Documentary,
Would you like to save the planet for new years?
The true culprit in Global Climate Change is the SUN! BUT, whether you believe it is caused by mans green house gas emissions OR through natural cycles, one FACT is clear: In 5 billion years, the SUN will destroy all life on Earth. Once the Sun exhausts its hydrogen fuel, it will bloat into a red giant. Its surface will engulf Venus and may extend to our orbit.
Science backs this fact. Nuclear energy my friends is going to kill every polar bear, furry little seal and talking cartoon rabbit and dear on this planet! Yes, the same type of energy developed by the USA with the sole intent to murder peace loving Asians on the brink of surrender will destroy Mother Earth in the future.
The only course of action we as humans with a social conscience can take is to destroy the Sun, and do it before it gets a chance to destroy our precious planet. Right now, the Sun is sending harmful UV light which is fueling the green house effect, it is also a key component to the climate of the Earth…IT must be stopped if we are to truly survive. We can sit here and point fingers or we can attack the source of the problem head on.
Will you join us in our struggle for survival by writing your representatives and demand that they encourage global cooperation in this Earth saving task? If you wait another 5 billion years, it will be too late!
In order to buy time, we must reclaim as much hydrogen here on earth and send it to the Sun in order to post-pone the inevitable until technology is developed that will destroy it.
The UN needs to establish a Global Hydrogen Reclamation Committee, staffed by the best and brightest sociologist. This committee will be responsible for deciding on which nations have surplus hydrogen based on potable water supplies and indoor plumbing. These nations will contribute those surpluses of hydrogen to be collected on behalf of the world, to be sent directly to the Sun in order to stave off disaster just one more day.
It may sound impossible, but it is better than doing nothing until a suitable solution to destroy the Sun can be found.
We must work to get China and India on board. Also consider the benefits gained from "Yellow" technologies! Jobs will be created in the Global Hydrogen Reclamation Division and there will be many more jobs directed toward creating a device or method to destroy the Sun.
While the "Green" movement seeks to profit from a temporary "fix", the "Yellow" movement actually seeks to stop the problem at its source! By destroying it once and for all. Only then will this life giving planet be habitable for cola drinking polar bears, sad eyed baby seals, hyper-intelligent dolphins and talking cartoon animals. Unless of course you deny the science which backs the fact that the Sun will exhaust its fuel source and become a red giant…thus destroying all those lovable creatures previously mentioned. Or are you in the pocket of "Big Green"? Bent on raking in profits from temporary and futile fixes with out a care about what will come in the long run…?
Something must be done now to ensure the survival of our life giving planet for eternity! Governmental action must be called upon in order to save Mother Earth from eminent destruction. We here at M.A.N./F.I.R.S.T. (Mankind Against Nuclear Fusion Intent on Reversing Solar Tyranny) believe the science is settled on this issue. Big Green would rather profit in the short run with curly light bulbs and electric cars, but WE offer a solution to a very real problem!
http://www.facebook.com//profile.php?v=f eed&story_fbid=232013857696&id=1 365020988#/pages/MANFIRST/231095016081
Icarus: So you base your thought on what you did not read? The science is settled. The Sun WILL indeed destroy this life giving planet as long as we do nothing. Open your mind and stop being a denier.
would i like to save the planet for new years? NO WAY! i want to get all i can out of the planet while i am alive. i want to squeeze the planet like a wet sponge, then run it through a ringer and get every fricking drop of potential out this planet just for me. when i am dead i won’t care a whit about the planet, let the future generations find another planet to use, as for me… i want it all and i want it now!
| Jan 01, 2010
There’s no way I’m reading all of that. But you’re against nuclear. So we get rid of it. What do we fill the void with? Coal? Oil?
Anything else is either ineffective or untested.
Wait, "The only course of action we as humans with a social conscience can take is to destroy the Sun"
Around here I decided you aren’t serious.
Dass | Jan 01, 2010
"The true culprit in Global Climate Change is the SUN!"
Long disproven, sorry. The true culprit is human activity - principally the burning of fossil fuels.
icarus62 | Jan 01, 2010
Yeah, what you said.
Amazing how the political man thinks he can save the world.
The world has been reparing and replenishing itself all by it’s self without "his"help.
I agree "the political man" wants my last dollar and he will think up anything to get it.
mishpocha | Jan 01, 2010
Whatever Works
April 20, 2010
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IMDB rating: 8.20 Plot: Attempting to impress his ideologies on religion, relationships, and the randomness (and worthlessness) of existence, lifelong New York resident Boris Yellnikoff rants to anyone who will listen, including the audience. But when he begrudgingly allows naive Mississippi runaway Melodie St. Ann Celestine to live in his apartment, his reclusive rages give way to an unlikely friendship and Boris begins to mold the impressionable young girl’s worldly views to match his own. When it comes to love, “whatever works” is his motto, but his already perplexed life complicates itself further when Melodie’s parents eventually track her down. |
i find Whatever Works iPod/iPhone version and download
Actors: David Larry,Brooks Adam,Kanouse Lyle,McKean Michael,Dickson Clifford Lee,Hill Conleth,Gallagher Jr. John,Comedy,Romance,
Why is it when someone works for a company for a long time they feel they can do whatever they want?
I just got my first professional job after college. I’m relatively young and new (23 yo). This is a hospital that contains a large number of employees. I notice employees that have been here for 10 or 30 years. They feel they can do whatever the hell they want to. Even treat people who are smaller then them like ****. I notice they have a kind of like don’t care type of attitudes about issues that are pressing as well. Also they are more likely to say what they really feel about some issue. I notice this for employees that have worked short times as well 2 to 5 years.
I know what you mean because I am in a new job, But, sometimes its not that they do w-e they want its, that they’ve been with the company longer and they do KNOW more then us. So, we feel like they do w-e they want. You get very comfortable when you have been working in a company for such a long time. I worked at Washington Mutual for 5 yrs and I felt so comfortable but, I never treated anyone bad if I needed to train you or help you in something I would do it! Good luck!
Me | Aug 11, 2006
one word.. SENIORITY .
babes | Aug 11, 2006
When you have been going to the same place every workday for 10 to 30 years, you become comfortable. Kind of like going home and sitting on the couch.
It isn’t something they probably even notice (you do, because you are new with fresh eyes).
However, being really comfortable does not give them the right to treat newer employees with disrespect. It could be that it is harder for employers to fire someone with that much seniority (they would have to have a really good reason and lots of documentation).
Please don’t use these employees as "models" of how to behave on the job. Work hard, don’t gossip or mistreat co-workers and if you must complain - be prepared with a solution.
carole0103 | Aug 11, 2006
There is a sense of job security.
The!AcademyIs | Aug 12, 2006
Yes dear you are right. The Best way to cope with the stress that creates is to meet and talk to friends after working hours about your experiences in the workplace. That will release some steam Off your mind.
amitabh | Aug 15, 2006
Mega Shark vs. Giant Octopus
April 18, 2010
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IMDB rating: 3.60 Plot: The California coast is terrorized by two enormous prehistoric sea creatures as they battle each other for supremacy of the sea. |
Actors: Lamas Lorenzo,Chao Vic,Lawlor Sean,Kreyling Dean,Blackehart Stephen,Harnish Dustin,Hengst Mark,Teh Michael,Nation Jonathan,Haley Chris,Healey Dana,Bolen John,Parrish Larry Wang,Action,Fantasy,Sci-Fi,
What's a good "bad" movie on Netflix?
Me and my friends are gonna watch really bad movies on Netflix using the party feature on Xbox Live. Any one know some poorly made movies that we can sit there and laugh at. We already watched "Mega Shark vs Giant Octopus."
the classic is Plan 9 From Outer Space–that one is lots of fun. it’s impossible to catch all the goofs; they’re coming too fast.
Killer Klowns From Outer Space is another so bad it’s good.
I haven’t seen them, but I’ve also heard the following are really, really bad:
The Beast of Yucca Flats
Santa Claus Conquers the Martians
Manos: the Hands of Fate
then there’s my personal favorite–Striptease. how can a movie with so much money have acting so bad?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Films_consi dered_the_worst_ever
LilyRT | Sep 16, 2009
evil dead 1, is on there, it actually pretty good but very craptacular, it was later remade by the same director into a very funny comedy,
behind the mask the rise of leslie vernon was a great horor
if you like horror theres,
fido
the host
or tons of episodes of
the masters of horror, but before you choose one, you should check out who directs that particular episode, cause some of the episodes are way to gross for all audiances. like the one by takashi miike, its gross gross and sick, but for the most part, the movies are funny.
wierd als movie UHF is fun
noselessman | Sep 16, 2009
Scooby Doo! The Mystery Begins
April 10, 2010
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IMDB rating: 5.40 Plot: What brings best friends together? For Daphne, Velma, Fred, Shaggy and Shaggy’s spunky pup Scooby-Doo, it’s a mystery! The feature-length live-action Scooby-Doo: The Mystery Begins original movie takes you back to when four teenage sleuths (plus one dog detective) first met. Unjustly accused of staging a spooky practical joke complete with ghosts, the kids are suspended from Coolsville High. To clear their names, they team to solve the supernatural mystery… and head straight into nonstop laughs and adventure. Special fun, special friends and extra-special effects make this “how-it-all-began” story - from boy-meets-dog to the first trip in the Mystery Machine and more - a doggone great time! |
Actors: Amell Robbie,Palatas Nick,Attadia Christopher,Chalk Gary,Harth C. Ernst,Jackson Dee Jay,Macdonald Shawn,Sutton Brian,Thomas Devon,Welker Frank,,
Is cartoon network making a show out of the new movie Scooby-Doo: the Mystery Begins?
I was watching it and i dont remember if cartoon network said it was going to become into a show, or it is based on the show, idk. sorry if i sound retarded its just i dont remember.
they tried to base it on the show. but i see more of A pup named Scooby-doo. but that’s just me. I really didn’t like this movie. It’s was really nothing like the show at all.
Ducky-Boy | Sep 15, 2009
Tale of the Tribe
April 3, 2010
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IMDB rating: 1.80 Plot: A modern sorceress crosses the line and contacts a force from beyond, disrupting the fabric of time; two lovers are threatened by forces unknown; eight souls draw together mysteriously. |
Actors: Cegnar Justin,Bravin Nick,Marcel Gregory,Elder Brian Lee,Meanza Jeffrey,Gjokaj Enver,Drama,Romance,
Will you please tell me I did this one right? (But if not, don't placate me with untruth…)?
Long before the birthing of Christ, or other Kings,
Before man pulled metal from the cold stone, and forged
weapons, tools and barring gates to which man now clings,
I bring you a tale by which a tribe was once scourged.
It was a bitter Winter and food was scarce had;
Barely could an infant suckle starved mothers’ breasts.
Inside the sealed cavern, the air was stale and bad;
Growing fear, a presence that could not be suppressed.
The old, wise woman held council with spirit guide,
Burning fragrant herbs and gazing into smoke.
Worried eyes of tribesmen were averted in pride,
The silence was broken when the old woman spoke.
She called to her the leader and his strongest man;
"Let us three go quickly and tunnel through the snow.
I will then tell you what the Ancient Ones demand."
Shadows shifted on cave walls as her torch burned low.
The people of the tribe were uneasy, dared hope;
Braced for blast of wind as the stone was pushed up slope.
Outside the killing cold was barely kept at bay,
Two men given orders felt dread consume their thoughts.
What price those unseen spirits bade they must then pay;
Yet in solemn hush, hearts heavy, did as were taught.
First they took the fur-lined cape from the old, still form.
Then they stripped the flesh from those old familial bones.
Lastly, they took the heart, not beating yet still warm;
Carried meat back to the cave and rolled in the stone.
They stood before the girl whom now would be woman;
And placed their heavy load before her on the hide.
Her Presence, then become something more than human,
She nodded once and saved tears, later to be cried.
"People, I bear tidings both sorrowful and sweet;
we have lost our dear Old Mother, she is now dead.
But these men were fortunate, they bring us bear-meat!
Enough to last until the Spring," she glibly said.
No one knew this secret, save for daughters of She
Who bore a line of daughters which ends now with me.
I attempt a sonnet-set here. If it is not correct, then I am going to make up a name for it. So please give it meticulous critique, if you will.
aaaaarrrrrgh!!!
Such a great piece of writing - and at
the end you ruin the effect by talking
about ’sonnet-sets’ and ‘making up
a name for a new form’……..
[I am a 'form anarchist', and such
talk causes me to have a serious
emotional response]
You write well, so leave the naming of
forms to festering pedants in musty
offices at at prestigious universities.
It’s not even close to being a sonnet.
Get over it. It’s too well-done to be
crammed into a ‘form’ anyway,
whether new or old and stodgy.
Let content come first and form
fall as it may. Or not - but if the
form doesn’t fit as well as you like,
accessorize! and hope for the best. 
(kinda like you did here)
